Tuesday, February 21, 2017

poem

The super sad spider
spinning its web
slither slither,
the sound he makes.
About to die
the hungry cat goes
his, his, his.
The cat goes
takes one bite
the spider is gone.



sibilance
Consonance
Onomatopoeia
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  1. Sarah CFebruary 22, 2017 at 6:27 AM

    I like how you used onomatopoeia in your poem. I also like how you combined two different stories and made them connect.

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