Week 15 comments

Colin-Writing Center
Sutter- Student Prompt 

Writing Center

     I went to the writing center last Thursday. It actually turned out to be pretty successful for my paper. I got an appointment with Mary Oliver. She helped me develop my thesis to make have more points to write about. We added a couple of points and took some points out of my essay.
    She also helped me on my outline. Some of my quotes were not that good. But the writing center helped me get quotes that supported my thesis and make more sense. If you are ever writing a paper I highly suggest you go to the writing center. Overall, the writing center is very helpful.

prompt

       The prompt that I have chose is Charle's prompt. Describe the most memorable moment that has happened in your life so far and why it is memorable? The most memorial part of my life is when is when my very first dog Rexi had to put down. She was an old dog that had hip problems. She was a black lab that we had for about six years. 
        This is very memorable to me because she died because when I was in the second grade. It was very sad  for a second grader to lose their dog. We ended up getting her cremated and then buried her ashes. One year later we got two new puppy labs. One black one just like Rexi and one white lab. Now I get to love and care or Buddy and Bella.

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Literary Analysis Process

        So far in my literary analysis process I have finished my outing and have one page done in my rough draft. My paper is about, how Golding portrays fires throughout the book. I actually found many points for this topic. There are about five main fires that have happen in the book. There is not much that I have struggled with yet, except for with the introduction.
        I would advise everyone to do the introduction first because I personally think that it the hardest things to do. That is because you can't give a summary about the book. I only have three sentences and then my thesis statement. Overall, I will finish my draft with time and the hardest part for mr was the introduction.

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         If I could go anywhere in the world it would be Venice. I would want to go there because instead of roads, there roads are water. You would have to buy a boat to get around the towns. It would be awesome looking out your window and see people going around in boats, instead of cars. I bet there is a lot of tourism in Venice.
         Also I bet everything in Venice would be very expensive.You can't really get too many good to Venice without it being expensive. A hotel room in Venice Would also be very expensive. If I ever went it most likely by pretty awesome though for the experience. Overall, I would want to travel to Venice if I could travel anywhere in the world.